英语好的来看一下!看哪里错了.Nowadays,more and more traffic accident occurs in the city which the economy is growing rapidly .there were over 30％accident is about traffic among all kinds of accient.Some citizens are only considerate the

英语好的来看一下!看哪里错了.Nowadays,more and more traffic accident occurs in the city which the economy is growing rapidly .there were over 30％accident is about traffic among all kinds of accient.Some citizens are only considerate the
英语好的来看一下!看哪里错了.
Nowadays,more and more traffic accident occurs in the city which the economy is growing rapidly .there were over 30％accident is about traffic among all kinds of accient.
Some citizens are only considerate their convenience in daily life ,but never considerate more about others live and themselves live.
In a word ,we should cherish our life,we are surrounded by many people who is love us .we are grown up hardly by our parents.we should do some thing to avoid this kind of attrafic accident.

英语好的来看一下!看哪里错了.Nowadays,more and more traffic accident occurs in the city which the economy is growing rapidly .there were over 30％accident is about traffic among all kinds of accient.Some citizens are only considerate the
Nowadays,more and more traffic accidents occur in the cities where the economies are growing rapidly .Over 30％ of accidents are traffic accidents among all kinds of accients.
Some citizens only consider their convenience in daily life ,but never consider more about other people's lives.
In a word ,we should cherish our life.We are surrounded by many people who love us .It is not easy for our parents to bring us up.we should do some thing to avoid this kind of accident.
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Nowadays,more and more traffic accident occurs in the city which the economy is growing rapidly .there were over 30％accident is about traffic among all kinds of accient.
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我用google翻译后：
Nowadays,more and more traffic accident occurs in the city which the economy is growing rapidly .there were over 30％accident is about traffic among all kinds of accient.
Some citizens are only considerate their convenience in daily life ,but never considerate more about others live and themselves live.
In a word ,we should cherish our life,we are surrounded by many people who is love us .we are grown up hardly by our parents.we should do some thing to avoid this kind of attrafic accident.
如今，越来越多的交通意外发生在经济迅速增长的城市有30％以上的事故之间的accient各种有关交通。
有些市民只体贴他们在生活上的便利，但从来没有体贴别人更多的生活和自己的生活。
总之，我们应该珍惜我们的生活，我们的周围很多人，谁是爱我们，我们长大我们parents.we难以应该做的一些事情，以避免这种attrafic事故。
出现英语的地方就表示有问题。对应一下就知道。抱歉，我才初一毕业。

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如今，越来越多的交通意外发生在经济迅速增长的城市有30％以上的事故之间的accient各种有关交通。
有些市民只体贴他们在生活上的便利，但从来没有体贴别人更多的生活和自己的生活。
总之，我们应该珍惜我们的生活，我们的周围很多人，谁是爱我们，我们长大我们parents.we难以应该做的一些事情，以避免这种attrafic事故。...

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如今，越来越多的交通意外发生在经济迅速增长的城市有30％以上的事故之间的accient各种有关交通。
有些市民只体贴他们在生活上的便利，但从来没有体贴别人更多的生活和自己的生活。
总之，我们应该珍惜我们的生活，我们的周围很多人，谁是爱我们，我们长大我们parents.we难以应该做的一些事情，以避免这种attrafic事故。

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all kinds of accidents
are only considerating
their conveniences
others lives
who loves us