求帮忙改作文语法错误Nowadays,all kinds of disputes are happening around the world everyday.That makes weapons become a hot topic.Are weapons metaphors of power?As far as I am concerned,weapons are metaphors of power.A weapon is a tool used

求帮忙改作文语法错误Nowadays,all kinds of disputes are happening around the world everyday.That makes weapons become a hot topic.Are weapons metaphors of power?As far as I am concerned,weapons are metaphors of power.A weapon is a tool used
求帮忙改作文语法错误
Nowadays,all kinds of disputes are happening around the world everyday.That makes weapons become a hot topic.Are weapons metaphors of power?As far as I am concerned,weapons are metaphors of power.A weapon is a tool used in order to inflict damage or harm to living beings.Power is the ability or right to control people or events.Through the two definitions,it is very easy for us to find out that weapon is just the kind of thing we would need if we want to control people or events.Weapons are metaphors of power to both people and countries.From the narrow sense,a weapon such like a gun endowed a policeman with the power to enforce the law.When chase a criminal,weapons make it more easier for the police to arrest the criminal and fulfill their duties.From the broad sense,weapons give a country the power to protect itself from the invaders and invasion other countries.

求帮忙改作文语法错误Nowadays,all kinds of disputes are happening around the world everyday.That makes weapons become a hot topic.Are weapons metaphors of power?As far as I am concerned,weapons are metaphors of power.A weapon is a tool used
修改了,本来加了红色和斜体.但放在这里就显示不了.只好你自个对比了.
Nowadays,all kinds of disputes are happening around the world every day.That makes weapons become a hot topic.Are weapons metaphors of power?As far as I am concerned,weapons are metaphors of power.A weapon is a tool used in order to inflict damage or harm to living beings.Power is the ability or right to control people or events.Through the two definitions,it is very easy for us to find out that weapon is just the kind of thing we would need when we want to control people or events.Weapons are metaphors of power to both people and countries.From the narrow sense,a weapon such like a gun endows a policeman with the power to enforce the law.When chasing a criminal,weapons make it easier for the police to arrest the criminal and fulfill their duties.From the broad sense,weapons give a country the power to protect itself from the invaders and invasion from other countries.

1、一般作文分三个部分：
第一部分以开头形式，介绍此作文的源头，以简单方式略过；
第二部为核心，主要讲述此篇作文的主要内容，围绕主要内容概述，切记离题；
第三部分以结束感慨内容为实，整篇作文的感受；
2、开头可以以静态或者动态出场，一般的作文都是以静态出场，如果是以动态出场分数比较高；
中间必需要围绕此篇作文为主，打分主要看经过，就是第二部分了，所以写不写得...

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1、一般作文分三个部分：
第一部分以开头形式，介绍此作文的源头，以简单方式略过；
第二部为核心，主要讲述此篇作文的主要内容，围绕主要内容概述，切记离题；
第三部分以结束感慨内容为实，整篇作文的感受；
2、开头可以以静态或者动态出场，一般的作文都是以静态出场，如果是以动态出场分数比较高；
中间必需要围绕此篇作文为主，打分主要看经过，就是第二部分了，所以写不写得好，第二部分是最为重要，开头和结尾是只修饰此作文的内容故事，作为一个陪衬，内容要清晰，不能离题，只能围绕一个故事去写，不能渗入其它内容去表达，老师一般见到一个故事出现两个情节，就会说是离题了，得的只有0分哦

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