作业帮短文改错(8个错误)Last summer holiday I joined a summer camp to British with my classmates.There I made some new friends whom were from Canvery,a small town in London.We showed them a lot of photoes we had taken in Beijing,such as the Palace Mu
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短文改错(8个错误)Last summer holiday I joined a summer camp to British with my classmates.There I made some new friends whom were from Canvery,a small town in London.We showed them a lot of photoes we had taken in Beijing,such as the Palace Mu
短文改错(8个错误)
Last summer holiday I joined a summer camp to British with my classmates.There I made some new friends whom were from Canvery,a small town in London.We showed them a lot of photoes we had taken in Beijing,such as the Palace Museum,the Great Wall and the Summer Palace.We also told them about the changes where have taken place in China.They were very surprised to hear that all of them said that Beijing was quite different with what they had heard of and it was almost as beautifully as Canvey.They decided to come to China as soon as possible.We are looking forward to their come.
短文改错(8个错误)Last summer holiday I joined a summer camp to British with my classmates.There I made some new friends whom were from Canvery,a small town in London.We showed them a lot of photoes we had taken in Beijing,such as the Palace Mu
Last summer holiday I joined a summer camp to British with my classmates to应改为in
There I made some new friends whom were from Canvery whom应改为who
We also told them about the changes where have taken place in China.where应改为that have 改为had
They were very surprised to hear that all of them said that Beijing was quite different with what they had heard of and it was almost as beautifully as Canvey very改为so with改为from
beautifully改为beautiful
We are looking forward to their come.come改为coming