帮我看一下这篇关于母亲的初中英语作文有什么错误My mother has been doing a lot of things for me.she is one of the most importance humans in my heart.she is forty years old,and she is a worker.My mother is every beautiful.She used

帮我看一下这篇关于母亲的初中英语作文有什么错误My mother has been doing a lot of things for me.she is one of the most importance humans in my heart.she is forty years old,and she is a worker.My mother is every beautiful.She used
帮我看一下这篇关于母亲的初中英语作文有什么错误
My mother has been doing a lot of things for me.she is one of the most importance humans in my heart.she is forty years old,and she is a worker.My mother is every beautiful.She used to have short hair.Now,she has straight and long hair .My mother can cook delicious food .My mother's hobby watching soap operas ,and we watch soap opreas every day.But I think they are very boring!My mother does breakfast for me every day.She has to get up early .and she is every care about my study.She often help me to study.She is very strict!My mother do lots of things for me.but I never do anythings for her.I think I'm very lazy So I make a decision.I am going to help my mother to do the dishes .I will do chores everyday.I will study hard .finally,I only want to say;" Mom,I love you "

帮我看一下这篇关于母亲的初中英语作文有什么错误My mother has been doing a lot of things for me.she is one of the most importance humans in my heart.she is forty years old,and she is a worker.My mother is every beautiful.She used
每句都认真看了,我从语法和语言习惯两个方面给你进行了修改,希望及时采纳.
My mother has been doing a lot of things for me不符合语言逻辑,改为过去式即可.
most importance humans改为most important people in my life.英语中基本不会用in my heart这样的短语,它和中文不一样.
she is forty years old,and she is a worker.建议整合为一句.she is a 40 years old worker.
改My mother is every beautiful.中every为very.
Now her hair is long and straight.这样符合习惯用语.
英语中不要每句开头都用My mother,适当用she代替.food之后的一句就可以改为watching soap opera with me is her hobby.
去掉后面and we watch soap opreas every day.
But I think they are（改为it's） very boring!
My mother does breakfast for me every day放在cook delicious food一句之后,这样连贯.
In order to provide with hot breakfast she has to get up early every morning.
.and she is every care about my study整句话都错了,is是多余的,改为and she cares about my study very much.
.She often help(helps) me (改为in) study
She is very strict(with me)!
My mother do(did) lots of things for me but I never do(did) anythings for her.
!So I make(i've made) a decision
.I am going to help my mother to(去掉to) do the dishes .
,I only want to say(这句改为 all I want to say is);" Mom,I love you !"

My mother's hobby watching soap operas ,and we watch soap opreas every day.这里缺少be动词，应该是My mother's hobby is watching soap operas ,and we watch soap opreas every day.
.and she is every care about ...

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My mother's hobby watching soap operas ,and we watch soap opreas every day.这里缺少be动词，应该是My mother's hobby is watching soap operas ,and we watch soap opreas every day.
.and she is every care about my study.这句话and前面应该是逗号，还有be动词后面不能接动词原形，应该改为and she cares about my study.
She often help me to study. 这句话中的she 是第三人称，一般现在时的第三人称单数，动词要做改变，应该为She often helps me to study.
My mother do lots of things for me.这句的错误和上一句一样，把do改为does
以上我对你作文的一些错误进行了修改，但你的作文简单句子太多，要写好一篇英文作文，要有简单句和复合句。建议就这么多了。

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importance改成important,
、humans改成people
.every改成very.
she used have a short hair改成she used to be short-haired.
下一句hair改成hairs.
My mother's hobby is watching...
My mother cooks b...

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importance改成important,
、humans改成people
.every改成very.
she used have a short hair改成she used to be short-haired.
下一句hair改成hairs.
My mother's hobby is watching...
My mother cooks breakfast for me every day
she cares about my study
she often helps me with study
my mother does a lot of things for me,but I haven't done anything for her.

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most importance humans应改为important，is every beautiful.应改为very，hobby watching soap operas 应改为is watching，every care应改为very，