帮忙修改一下英语对话,写了一个英语对话,请高手帮忙修改一下语法之类的错误.添加点语句也没关心,保持文章完整性.Dialogue.O :Anna,I'm really really sorry I'm so late!A :Why are you so late?I was worried that

帮忙修改一下英语对话,写了一个英语对话,请高手帮忙修改一下语法之类的错误.添加点语句也没关心,保持文章完整性.Dialogue.O :Anna,I'm really really sorry I'm so late!A :Why are you so late?I was worried that
帮忙修改一下英语对话,
写了一个英语对话,请高手帮忙修改一下语法之类的错误.添加点语句也没关心,保持文章完整性.
Dialogue.
O :Anna,I'm really really sorry I'm so late!
A :Why are you so late?I was worried that maybe you'd had an problem.
O :Sorry to worry you,but my dog was sick all day long yesterday.
A :Oh.
O :I'm took her to a hospital,since she looked so sick.but her condition was never the better.So I have to take care of her all night.
A :Oh my...that's too bad.What happened to her?Is she OK now?
O :she had a problem with intestine,but fortunately she get better today.
A :I'm so glad to hear that.
O :Thanks you.and...whatever the reason,I'm sorry to have you kept waiting long.Let me buy you lunch.
A :No,you don't need to do that.I understand.
O :Come on.It's the least I can do.
A :Oh well,if you insist.Anyway you said you want to buy a suit and some stuff.right?
O :Yeah right.
A :Then,how about going to the Gang nam station.There are lots of shops and department stores.
O :that's good idea.let's go!
A :Oh..I don't know how to get there from here.Owen do you know the best way to get there?
O :I think we'd better take the subway to Gang nam.
A :um..subway?What about the bus?
O :We can take a bus,too.But if we take the bus,we'll get stuck in the heavy traffic.Taking a subway is better for avoiding that.
A :Oh,OK.I don't want to waste time on the road.How long does it take to get there by subway?
O :I'm not sure...um...about forty minutes...it won’t take long.
A :That's not so bad.
O :Come on,let’s go to the subway station.
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O :Anna,Do you know the professor Kim?
A :Yes,I know him.Why?
O :He is the host of the party that I'll go next week.
A :Oh,really?
O :Yeah,that's why I ask you to go to shopping today,To buy a suit for party.
A :I see.Everybody else will be dressed up.
O :Yes,right.And I need your advice.Do you think I should take something for the professor?
A :Yeah,you definitely should.It's the professors party!you have to do that.
O:OK.Then what kind of present would be fine.Would it be OK to buy a tie for him?
A :Um...Maybe,Ah!How about flower pot?I've heard that he really like take good care of plants.
O :Oh,does he?That's good idea.
A :Like professor,I have a lot of interest in plants.So I can help you to buy a plants.
O :Thank you so much.I really don't know about the flower and trees.It'll be a big help for me.
A :It is my pleasure to help you.In the Gang-nam station,flower shops are numerous.It'll be easy to find the good plants.
O :That's great.Here comes the subway down for Gang nam.Let's take it.

帮忙修改一下英语对话,写了一个英语对话,请高手帮忙修改一下语法之类的错误.添加点语句也没关心,保持文章完整性.Dialogue.O :Anna,I'm really really sorry I'm so late!A :Why are you so late?I was worried that
Dialogue.
O :Anna,I'm really really sorry I'm so late!
A :Why are you so late?I was worried that maybe you'd had（have） an（a） problem.
O :Sorry to worry you,but my dog was sick yesterday(yesterday all day long ).
A :Oh.
O :I'm took her to a hospital,since she looked so sick(去掉so).but her condition was never the(去掉the,加上to be) better.So I have(had) to take care of her all night.
A :Oh my...that's too bad.What happened to her?Is she OK now?
O :she had a problem with intestine,but fortunately she get(gets) better today.
A :I'm so glad to hear that.
O :Thanks you.and...whatever the reason,I'm sorry to have you kept(keep) waiting (加个so增强语气)long.Let me buy you lunch.
A :No,you don't need to do that.I understand.
O :Come on.It's the least I can do.
A :Oh well,if you insist.Anyway you said you want to buy a suit and some stuff.right?
O :Yeah right.
A :Then,how about going to the Gang nam（Nam） station.There are lots of shops and department stores.
O :that's(That's) good idea.let's go!
A :Oh..I don't know how to get there from here.Owen do you know the best way to get there?
O :I think we'd better take the subway to Gang nam.
A :um..subway?What about the bus?
O :We can take a bus,too.But if we take the bus,we'll get stuck in the heavy traffic.Taking a(the) subway is better for avoiding that.
A :Oh,OK.I don't want to waste time on the road.How long does it take to get there by subway?
O :I'm not sure...um...about forty minutes...it won’t take long.
A :That's not so bad.
O :Come on,let’s go to the subway station.
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O :Anna,Do you know the professor Kim?
A :Yes,I know him.Why?
O :He is the host of the party that I'll go next week.
A :Oh,really?
O :Yeah,that's why I ask you to go to shopping today,To buy a suit for party.
A :I see.Everybody else will be dressed up（加个in）.
O :Yes,right.And I need your advice.Do you think I should take something for the professor?
A :Yeah,you definitely should.It's the professors(professor's) party!you have to do that.
O:OK.Then what kind of present would be fine.Would it be OK to buy a tie for him?
A :Um...Maybe,Ah!How about flower pot?I've heard that he really like take good care of plants.
O :Oh,does he?That's (加个a)good idea.
A :Like professor,I have a lot of interest in plants.So I can help you to buy a plants(plant).
O :Thank you so much.I really don't know about the (去the)flower and trees(the).It'll be a big help for me.
A :It is my pleasure to help you.In the Gang-nam station,flower shops are numerous.It'll be easy to find the good plants.
O :That's great.Here comes the subway down for Gang nam.Let's take it

Dialogue.
O : Anna, I'm really sorry I'm so late!
A : What happen? I was worried that maybe you had something
wrong.
O : I'm Sorry for it, but my dog was sick all day just now.
A ...

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Dialogue.
O : Anna, I'm really sorry I'm so late!
A : What happen? I was worried that maybe you had something
wrong.
O : I'm Sorry for it, but my dog was sick all day just now.
A : Oh.
O : I took it/(her) to a hospital for she looked so sick. she still very weak just now. So I have to take care of her all night.
A : Oh , that's too bad. Is she OK now?
O : she had a problem with intestine, but fortunately she get better the morning.
A : I'm so glad to hear that.
O : Thanks you. and... , I'm still so sorry to have you kept waiting long. Let me have you for lunch.
A : No, you needn't do it.
O : Come on. It's just what I can do.
A : Oh well, if you insist. please get me a suit and some stuff. right?
O : Yeah right.
A : Then, how about going to the Gang nam station. There are lots of shops and department stores.
O : that's good idea. let's go!
A : Oh.. I don't know how to get there .And do you know ?
O : I think we'd better take the subway .
A : um.. subway? why do not take the bus?
O : That can be one way, too. But if we take the bus, we may get stuck by the heavy traffic.
A : Oh, OK. I don't want to waste more time on the road. How long does it take to get there by subway?
O : I'm not sure... um... about forty minutes... it won’t take long.
A : That's good.
O : Come on, let’s go .
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O : Anna, Do you know professor Kim?
A : Yes, I know him. Why you ask that?
O : He is the host of the party to which I would go next week.
A : Oh, really?
O : Yeah, that's why I ask you to go to shopping today, To buy a suit for the party.
A : I see. Everybody will be dressed up then.
O : You are right. And I need advice from you. Do you think I should take something for professor Kim?
A : of course. It's your professors party! you need do it.
O: OK. Then what present would be fine. Would it be OK to buy a tie for him?
A : Um... Maybe!But how about flower pot? I've heard that he really like to take good care of flower.
O : Oh, does he? That's good idea.
A : I have much interest in flower,too . So I can help you to buy it.
O : Thank you so much. I really don't know about the flower. It'll be great help for me.
A : It is my pleasure . In the Gang-nam station, flower shops are numerous. It'll be easy to find some colorful flower.
O : That's great. Here comes the subway down for Gang nam. Let's take it.

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Dialogue.
O : Anna, I'm really really sorry I'm so late!
A : Why are you so late? I was worried that maybe you'd had an problem.
O : Sorry to worry you, but my dog was sick all day long y...

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Dialogue.
O : Anna, I'm really really sorry I'm so late!
A : Why are you so late? I was worried that maybe you'd had an problem.
O : Sorry to worry you, but my dog was sick all day long yesterday.
A : Oh.
O : I've taken her to a hospital, since she looked so sick. but her condition was never the better. So I have to take care of her all night.
A : Oh my... that's too bad. What happened to her? Is she OK now?
O : she had a problem with intestine, but fortunately she gets better today.
A : I'm so glad to hear that.
O : Thank you. and... whatever the reason, I'm sorry to have you kept waiting long. my treat today.
A : No, you don't need to do that. I understand.
O : Come on. It's the least I can do.
A : Oh well, if you insist. Anyway you said you wanted to buy a suit and other stuff. right?
O : Yeah right.
A : Then, how about going to the Gang nam station. There are lots of shops and department stores.
O : that's good idea. let's go!
A : Oh.. I don't know how to get there from here. Owen do you know the best way to get there?
O : I think we'd better take the subway to Gang nam.
A : um.. subway? What about the bus?
O : We can take a bus, too. But if we take the bus, we'll get stuck in the heavy traffic. Taking a subway is better way of avoiding that.
A : Oh, OK. I don't want to waste time on the road. How long does it take to get there by subway?
O : I'm not sure... um... about forty minutes... it won’t take long.
A : That's not so bad.
O : Come on, let’s go to the subway station.
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O : Anna, Do you know professor Kim?
A : Yes, I know him. Why?
O : He is the host of the party that I'll go to next week.
A : Oh, really?
O : Yeah, that's why I ask you to go shopping today, To buy a suit for the party.
A : I see. Everybody else will be dressing up.
O : Yes, right. And I need your advice. Do you think I should take something for the professor?
A : Yeah, you definitely should. It's the professors party! you have to do that.
O: OK. Then what kind of present would be fine. Would it be OK to buy a tie for him?
A : Um... Maybe, Ah! How about flower pot? I've heard that he really likes to take good care of plants.
O : Oh, does he? That's good idea.
A : Like professor, I have a lot of interest in plants. So I can help you to buy a plant.
O : Thank you so much. I really don't know about the flowers and trees. It'll be a big help to me.
A : It is my pleasure to help you. In the Gang-nam station, flower shops are numerous. It'll be easy to find the good plants.
O : That's great. Here comes the subway down for Gang nam. Let's take it.
整篇文章已经非常好了， 不过其中有一点点小的语法错误和不地道的英文表达， 请对比原文，已经修改好了。

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