帮忙改下两分钟的英语演讲稿 Since life consist endless changes,therefore we could expect the colorful and changeable future,this is what make us meaningful in our life.There will certainly be a lot of turning points in our life which woul

帮忙改下两分钟的英语演讲稿 Since life consist endless changes,therefore we could expect the colorful and changeable future,this is what make us meaningful in our life.There will certainly be a lot of turning points in our life which woul
帮忙改下两分钟的英语演讲稿
Since life consist endless changes,therefore we could expect the colorful and changeable future,this is what make us meaningful in our life.
There will certainly be a lot of turning points in our life which would influence our achievement potentially.As far as I’m concerned,the most important milestone in our life is the day that we realized we have grown up.
I have been living alone for one year as my parents moved to the other city due to the company arrangement.The day they leaved ,when I saw them walking pass the security check,I know,I have to be strong enough to cop with all the things,from the simple housework ,to repair the light bulb,I learned how to live my life wonderfully as if my parents are beside me.Sometimes I show the new curtain to my father through the web-camera,I looking at his smile,and that transfers to the sense of achievement which full of my heart.
This moment,I think I have grown up.The maturity make you know how fantastic the world is.You will learn to appreciate the people around you ,no matter your rivalry or your best friends,you will appreciate the people who ever taken care of you ,and swear to look after them by your all endeavor inwardly.You will finally have gratitude for everything happens around you ,and laugh happily and loudly in the rainy days.You will hold strong strength to fight the difficulties and keep trying.You learned to give up,but never give in.

帮忙改下两分钟的英语演讲稿 Since life consist endless changes,therefore we could expect the colorful and changeable future,this is what make us meaningful in our life.There will certainly be a lot of turning points in our life which woul
Since life consists of endless changes,therefore we could expect the colorful and various future:this is what makes us meaningful in our life.
There will be definitely a lot of turning-points in our life which would influence our achievement potentially.As far as I’m concerned,the most significant milestone in our life is the day that we realize we have grown up.
I have been living alone for one year as my parents moved to the other city because of the company arrangement.On the very day they leaved ,something deep inside me changed.When I saw them walking pass the security check,I know that I have to be strong enough to cope with all the things,ranging from the simple housework ,to the chores like repairing the light bulb.I learned how to live my life wonderfully as if my parents were beside me.Sometimes I show the new curtain to my father through the web-camera,I’m looking at his smile,and that transfers to the sense of achievement which full of my heart.
This moment,I think I have grown up.The maturity transformation makes you know how fantastic the world is.You will learn to appreciate the people around you ,both your rivals or your best friends,you will appreciate the people who have ever taken care of you ,and swear to look after them by your all endeavor inwardly.You will finally have gratitude for everything happening around you ,and laugh happily and loudly in the rainy days.You will hold strong strength to fight the difficulties and keep trying.You learned to give up,but never give in.
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looks good! maybe my english is poorer than you.

life is consist of endless changes, therefore we should expect a colorful and changeable future, that is what makes our life more meaningful.
There will be certainly a lot of turning points in ...

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life is consist of endless changes, therefore we should expect a colorful and changeable future, that is what makes our life more meaningful.
There will be certainly a lot of turning points in our life, which would influence our achievements indirectly. As far as I’m concerned, the most important milestone in our life is the day when we realize we have grown up.
I have been living alone for one year because my parents have moved to another city due to the company's job transfer. The day when they left ,I saw them passing the security check, I realized I have to be strong enough to cope with all the things, from the simple housework , to repairing the light bulb. I learnt how to live my life more wonderfully as if my parents were beside me. Sometimes I showed the new curtain to my father through the web-camera on the interent, I looked at his smile, and that made me a sense of achievement fulling in my heart.
At this moment, I know I have grown up. It's maturity that makes you know how fantastic the world is. You will learn to appreciate the people around you , no matter they are your enemies or your best friends; you will appreciate the people who have ever taken care of you , and you would swear to yourself to look after them by your endeavor inwardly. You will finally own gratitude for everything that happens around you , and will laugh happily and loudly in the rainy days. You will have strong strength and power to face up to the difficulties confronted with you and make progress. Sometimes you will learn to give up something, but never will you give in.

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这么好的作文，还要改吗？自己加强一下！真不满意的话，自己品一品。我参加时就是这样。