哪位高手我检查一下英语作文有无语法错误.1.Today is my birthday.I invited my friends and classmates.We have fun together.Time flies.Instant we all go home.But I really enjoyed this day.2.This summer I went to Qinghai.Everywhere there

哪位高手我检查一下英语作文有无语法错误.1.Today is my birthday.I invited my friends and classmates.We have fun together.Time flies.Instant we all go home.But I really enjoyed this day.2.This summer I went to Qinghai.Everywhere there
哪位高手我检查一下英语作文有无语法错误.
1.Today is my birthday.I invited my friends and classmates.We have fun together.Time flies.Instant we all go home.But I really enjoyed this day.
2.This summer I went to Qinghai.Everywhere there is a style yellow rape.Large tracts of grassland.There is blue sky.We went horseback riding.And sheep to play.I very much enjoyed the trip
我想说你们的回答都很棒。
A long time ago ,there is a girl called Alice.One day,she fell into a hole.So she entered a magical world.During that time,she was always self-understanding.Finally she found turned out to be a dream.

哪位高手我检查一下英语作文有无语法错误.1.Today is my birthday.I invited my friends and classmates.We have fun together.Time flies.Instant we all go home.But I really enjoyed this day.2.This summer I went to Qinghai.Everywhere there
1.Today is my birthday.I invited my friends and classmates.We _had_ fun together.Time flew._We_ _have_ all _gone_ home_,but_ I really enjoyed this day.
2.I went to Qinghai _this summer_._There_ is a _stylish_ yellow _rod_ _and_ large tracts of grassland.There is _the_ blue sky.We went _horse_ riding_,and_ played with the sheep.I enjoyed the trip _very much._
严肃说,rape字勿乱用,这字是强奸的意思.要说一支杆,用rod.

1.不完整,是个病句~~~I invited my friends and classmates干嘛？应修改，例如I invited my friends and classmates to my home.
2.But I really enjoyed this day？是But I really enjoyed today吧。。。
3.第一提的那些动词不对，要统一用过去式

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1.不完整,是个病句~~~I invited my friends and classmates干嘛？应修改，例如I invited my friends and classmates to my home.
2.But I really enjoyed this day？是But I really enjoyed today吧。。。
3.第一提的那些动词不对，要统一用过去式
4.I very much enjoyed the trip？个人认为应该I 后面应该加上be动词

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1那个时态注意，we had fun today，还有那个went home注意保持事态一致。Instant 这句有问题。
2 rape是强奸的意思，那句完全看不懂。

第一句中 首先，动词时态不一致，应该统一用过去式，即：we had fun together.其次是Instant we all go home这句话，就你的句子中来说你的instant应该是修饰go的吧，所以应该用副词形式，还有我个人认为逻辑上有点小问题，应该是他们回家吧，你在你自己的家，即instantly they all went home.对于I invited my friends ...

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第一句中 首先，动词时态不一致，应该统一用过去式，即：we had fun together.其次是Instant we all go home这句话，就你的句子中来说你的instant应该是修饰go的吧，所以应该用副词形式，还有我个人认为逻辑上有点小问题，应该是他们回家吧，你在你自己的家，即instantly they all went home.对于I invited my friends and classmates。我个人认为句子没有语法问题，但是意思似乎有点不完整。另外，个人觉得instant这个词用的不大妥当，你可再琢磨一个更好的词。
第二句话大概知道了你想说的意思，但是我只能说你那是典型的metaphrase，即literal translation,属于chinglish。就比如we went horeback riding,其实你说we went horse riding就可以了。
但是能看出你还是有东西可以写，很好哟，我写作文时都不知道该写什么，呵呵，上面只是我的一些个人意见哈，加油加油哦！

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