请高手帮我看看下面一小段英文有无语法错误,帮改下,This book just a simple diary about man.What attacts me there is the author's spirit of dedication and pursuit about dreams.A man faces thousands of difficulities in everyday.each

请高手帮我看看下面一小段英文有无语法错误,帮改下,This book just a simple diary about man.What attacts me there is the author's spirit of dedication and pursuit about dreams.A man faces thousands of difficulities in everyday.each
请高手帮我看看下面一小段英文有无语法错误,帮改下,
This book just a simple diary about man.What attacts me there is the author's spirit of dedication and pursuit about dreams.A man faces thousands of difficulities in everyday.each problem could drive one person to despire.Nobody knows how hard the road was for him.No money to do the film,no money to repire his house,a lot of sentences on the book reveal his sorrowful heart.although he lived in a tough life but his mother,his wife and his lovely son gave him huge strengh to make him believe that life is beautiful.His selfless kindness give me so deep impression.that book is not merely a book,that is a touching conversation between reader and a great master.

请高手帮我看看下面一小段英文有无语法错误,帮改下,This book just a simple diary about man.What attacts me there is the author's spirit of dedication and pursuit about dreams.A man faces thousands of difficulities in everyday.each
This book (is/was)just a simple diary about （a)man.What attacts me (删去there） is the author's spirit of dedication and pursuing (去掉about） dreams.A man faces thousands of difficulities (去掉in） everyday.each problem could drive (a) person to despire.Nobody knows how hard the road (will be/is) for him/her.No money for the film,no money for repiring his house,a lot of sentences on the book reveal his sorrowful heart.although he lived in a tough life (去掉but） his mother,his wife and his lovely son gave him huge strengh to make him believe that life is beautiful.His selfless kindness deeply impressed me.So that book is not merely a simple book,but is a touching conversation between reader and a great master.