请问这段话有没有语法错误Coco Chanel wasn't just ahead of her time ,she was ahead of herself .If one looks at the work of contemporary fashion designers asdifferent from one another as Miuccia Prada and Donatella Versace,one sees that many

请问这段话有没有语法错误Coco Chanel wasn't just ahead of her time ,she was ahead of herself .If one looks at the work of contemporary fashion designers asdifferent from one another as Miuccia Prada and Donatella Versace,one sees that many
请问这段话有没有语法错误
Coco Chanel wasn't just ahead of her time ,she was ahead of herself .If one looks at the work of contemporary fashion designers asdifferent from one another as Miuccia Prada and Donatella Versace,one sees that many of their strategies echo what Chanel once did.The way ,75 years ago ,she mixeed up the vocabulary of male and female clothes and created fashion that offered the wearer a feeling of hidden luxury rather than ostentation are just two examples of how her taste and sense of style overlap with today's fashion.
Chanel would not have defined herself as a feminist ——in fact ,she onsistently spoke of femininity rather than of feminism——yet her work is unquestionably part of the liberation of women not once but twice ,during two distinct periods decades apart :the 1920s and the '50s .She not only appropriated styles ,fabrics and articles of clothing that were worn by men but also ,beginning with how she dressed herslfe ,appropriated sports clothes as part of the language of fashion .
One can see how her style evolved out of necessity and defiance .She couldn't afford the fashionable clothes of the period——so she rejected them and made her own,using ,say,the sports jackets and ties that were everyday male attire around the racetrac,where she was climbing her first social ladders.

请问这段话有没有语法错误Coco Chanel wasn't just ahead of her time ,she was ahead of herself .If one looks at the work of contemporary fashion designers asdifferent from one another as Miuccia Prada and Donatella Versace,one sees that many
Coco Chanel wasn't just ahead of her time ,（此处应是句号）she was ahead of herself .If one looks at（最好别用look at,可以用compare with） the work of contemporary fashion designers as different from one another as Miuccia Prada and Donatella Versace,one sees（建议用will discover/find） that many of their strategies echo what Chanel once did（strategy不应与do搭配）.The way（不明本意,可删） ,75 years ago ,she mixed up the vocabulary of male and female clothes and created fashion that offered the wearer a feeling of hidden luxury rather than ostentation are just two examples of how her taste and sense of style overlap（用现在完成时） with today's fashion.（此句有两个谓语,在are 前断句并加These）
Chanel would not have defined herself as a feminist ——in fact ,she onsistently spoke of femininity rather than of feminism——yet her work is unquestionably part of the liberation of women not once but twice ,during two distinct periods decades apart :the 1920s and the '50s .She not only appropriated（appropriate作动词意为侵占、挪用公款等,若当形容词则缺动词） styles ,fabrics and articles of clothing that were worn（语法没错,但worn有把衣服穿得破洞的意思,略显奇怪,仅个人意见） by men but also ,beginning with how she dressed herself ,appropriated （同上） sports clothes as part of the language of fashion .
One can see （同上） how her style evolved out of necessity and defiance（evolve out of 指从...发展出...,好像这里表达的不是这个意思） .She couldn't afford the fashionable clothes of the period——（改为逗号）so she rejected them and made her own,using ,say（语法没错,但有点口语化,不够正式）,the sports jackets and ties that were everyday male attire （male's everyday attire） around the racetrack,where she was climbing her first social ladders.（where如果指代的是racetrack的话最好去掉逗号）
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