句子改错,语法好的进,谢谢.竞争是与生俱来的,就连小孩子也不例外,而且身为一个赢家,他的背后本身就应该就有批评的声音.competition is born with a man besides little child,and moreover,it is not uncommon tha

句子改错,语法好的进,谢谢.竞争是与生俱来的,就连小孩子也不例外,而且身为一个赢家,他的背后本身就应该就有批评的声音.competition is born with a man besides little child,and moreover,it is not uncommon tha
句子改错,语法好的进,谢谢.
竞争是与生俱来的,就连小孩子也不例外,而且身为一个赢家,他的背后本身就应该就有批评的声音.
competition is born with a man besides little child,and moreover,it is not uncommon that to be a winner must surround by critical voices.
不知道这样说行吗?to be a winner 好,还是being好?
还是这样好.
compete is instinctive,including little child.there has plenty of person envy of winner criticizes them a lot.
还是这样.person加s吗,including用在这里适合吗?plenty of 可以这么修饰可数名词吗?criticizes用加s吗?

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句子改错,语法好的进,谢谢.竞争是与生俱来的,就连小孩子也不例外,而且身为一个赢家,他的背后本身就应该就有批评的声音.competition is born with a man besides little child,and moreover,it is not uncommon tha
be born的主语应该是人
besides 除（某人[某事物]）之外（还有),用在这里不合适.
身为一个赢家 being a winner,或者可以直接说Winners ...
sb is surrounded by sth
* Man is born with competition.It is true even with little child.Moreover,it is not uncommon that winners should be surrounded by critical voices.
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compete是个动词,不能单独用
including也是要有一系列同类的的列举,之后再including ...
there 和 has不能这样用
person的复数就是people啦
plenty of 可修饰可数和不可数名词
envy 做动词,也不能直接用原型
criticize在这儿不是做谓语,要用现在分词形式
后半句也可以这样说
* There are plenty of people envying the winners and criticizing them a lot.
或者
* There are plenty of critical voices surrounding the winners.

这句话我会这样翻：
People are confronted with competition all through their lives, in their childhood as well. Moreover, being a winner, it's normal that he's surrounded by voices of criticism.
其实当你在翻译...

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这句话我会这样翻：
People are confronted with competition all through their lives, in their childhood as well. Moreover, being a winner, it's normal that he's surrounded by voices of criticism.
其实当你在翻译的时候，很多时候会发现中文说得不够严谨的地方，第一句就是如此。其实你想表达的意思是“竞争是人一生都要面对的，即使是在童年时代也是如此”。所以，我是用英文把这个意思重新表达了一遍。你的译文是试图直译中文，在中文都别扭的情况下，是不可能译得通顺的。
后面半句：
1)有了moreover的时候就不需要and了。
2)从中文来看，后半句的主语“他”是一个已知的人物，是上下文都在讨论的人物。后半句并不是说“作为赢家背后常常有批评的声音”这种普遍现象，所以不知道你的英文it's not uncommon是从哪来的。
再来看看你对后半句的第二种翻译。当然，你的表达已经跟原句的意思不完全一样了。我把语法给你纠正一下：
There are plenty of people who are jealous of the winners and criticize them a lot.
首先“有”是there is/are，不是there has/have，单复数与名词一致。这里你的意思是“很多人”，所以是复数。plenty of可以修饰不可数名词，也可以修饰可数名词。
后面这些人的行为应该是people的定语从句，要加who(或that)。
“嫉妒”用一个动词表达是envy，用词组表达是be envious/jealous of。
“赢家”在这里是一个泛指，指的是所有赢家，所以用复数。
criticize的主语还是“很多人”，所以用复数形式，即不加s。

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Competition is born, even small kids are no exception. So it is natural to have critics behind winners.
翻译忌讳的就是按字面一字一字地去译，要根据意思，用目标语重新组织，我没有逐字去翻译，但我想，也准确地表达了你想说的意思。你说的，完全是Chinglish，我想，真正说英语的人是看不懂的...

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Competition is born, even small kids are no exception. So it is natural to have critics behind winners.
翻译忌讳的就是按字面一字一字地去译，要根据意思，用目标语重新组织，我没有逐字去翻译，但我想，也准确地表达了你想说的意思。你说的，完全是Chinglish，我想，真正说英语的人是看不懂的吧，反正我不看你的中文，不知道你想说什么，尽管我的母语是中文。
批评的声音不一定就是像你理解的那样，就是说有批评的人critics

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