please!帮我修改一下英语作文.My Summer Holiday Scheme This the last holiday for my primary school life. It is no homework and not things about school to do. What a blank holiday it is ! But I don’t want that. Because I think my holiday sh

please!帮我修改一下英语作文.My Summer Holiday Scheme This the last holiday for my primary school life. It is no homework and not things about school to do. What a blank holiday it is ! But I don’t want that. Because I think my holiday sh
please!帮我修改一下英语作文.
My Summer Holiday Scheme
This the last holiday for my primary school life. It is no homework and not things about school to do. What a blank holiday it is ! But I don’t want that. Because I think my holiday should be more meaningful, not like this, nothing to do, that is so boring and vain. So I need to do somethings to make it be more substantial, I like substantial feeling.
Now, let me tell you my plans of this summer holiday. First, I think I need to learn somethings that is useful. So I come here to have the classes of English and Math. I suppose those may help me in the future or when I need it. After that, I will read a lot of books and do many exercises for my English and Math. Because I will have a very big and serious exam. Will I go to the best class is hinge on it. Then you know how important that is.
Third, I will often visit my Grandparents. Because in a way, they are lonely. They need someone often talk with them even play with them, just like the children. So, I will often do that, to make them feel more happy.
Fourth, I will do some sports, to keep fit. You may know, how important heathy is……
I think I need to stop. My paper is not long enough if I wirte to much. And, these are my summer holiday scheme. I will finish them on time. I promise.

please!帮我修改一下英语作文.My Summer Holiday Scheme This the last holiday for my primary school life. It is no homework and not things about school to do. What a blank holiday it is ! But I don’t want that. Because I think my holiday sh
My Summer Holiday Scheme
This (is) the last holiday for(during) my primary school life. It(there) is no homework to do. What a blank(?free) holiday it is ! But I don’t (去掉want that)(like the way). Because I think my holiday should be more meaningful, not like this, nothing to do, that is so boring and vain. So I need(decide) to do something(s) to make it (be)(去掉) more substantial（,）（.） I （去掉like substantial feeling.）（enjoy the sense of achievement.）
Now, let me tell you my plans (去掉of this summer holiday）. First, I think I need to learn somethings （去掉that is） useful (for my study). So I come here to have the classes of English and Math. I (去掉suppose)(hope) those （courses） may（will） help me in the future （or when I need it）. After that, I will read a lot of books and do many exercises （去掉for）（about） my English and Math. （去掉Because） I will have a （very） big （and serious） exam (which is important to me). (if) (去掉Will I)(I will) go to the best class (去掉is hinge on)(depends on)（去掉it）（my grades）.（ 去掉Then you know how important that is.）
Third, I will often visit my Grandparents. （Because） in a way, they are lonely. They need someone （to） talk with them even play with them, just like the children. So I will (often do that)(try my best ) to make them feel more happy.
Fourth, I will do some sports to keep fit. (You may know, how important heathy is……)(As is known,heath is important to everyone.)
(去掉I think I need to stop. My paper is not long enough if I wirte to much). （And,）（As a whole） these are my (ideas about )summer holiday (去掉scheme). （I will finish them on time. I promise）（I promise to myself that I will realise them on time.）

oh, god ,前面的仁兄直接在线翻译出来的强悍,somethings翻译不出来是因为拼写错误了.应该是something,不加S的,heathy应该是Health吧wirte应该是Write,别的问题不大啦.呵呵...我也是英盲

我的暑假计划
这最后一个假期，我的小学生活。这是没有功课，而不是对学校的事情要做。什么是空白的假期，这是！但我不想说。因为我觉得我的假期应该是更有意义的，不喜欢这样，没有什么事情，是这样的沉闷和徒劳的。因此，我需要做的somethings使它显得更为充实，我喜欢大量的感觉。
现在，让我告诉你，我的计划，这个暑假。首先，我想我需要学习somethings认为是有益的。所以我来到这...

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我的暑假计划
这最后一个假期，我的小学生活。这是没有功课，而不是对学校的事情要做。什么是空白的假期，这是！但我不想说。因为我觉得我的假期应该是更有意义的，不喜欢这样，没有什么事情，是这样的沉闷和徒劳的。因此，我需要做的somethings使它显得更为充实，我喜欢大量的感觉。
现在，让我告诉你，我的计划，这个暑假。首先，我想我需要学习somethings认为是有益的。所以我来到这里，有班的英语和数学。我想这些可以帮助我在未来的或当我需要它。之后，我会读了很多书籍和做很多演习，我的英语和数学。因为我将有一个很大的和严重的考试。我会去最好的工人阶级是铰链上。然后，您知道如何重要的是，是。
第三，我会经常光顾我的祖父母。因为在某种程度上，他们是寂寞的。他们需要有人经常跟他们玩，甚至与他们，就像儿童。所以，我往往会做到这一点，使他们感受到更多的快乐。
第四，我会做一些体育，强身健体。您可能知道的，是多么重要heathy是… …
我想我必须停止。我的论文是不够长，如果我wirte得多。和，这些都是我的暑假计划。我会完成他们的时间。我答应。

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