英语作文 检查很简单的narrative paragraph.求检查一下sentence structure,时态,还有一些语句通顺之类的,总之看不顺眼的都请指出!

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英语作文 检查很简单的narrative paragraph.求检查一下sentence structure,时态,还有一些语句通顺之类的,总之看不顺眼的都请指出!
英语作文 检查
很简单的narrative paragraph.求检查一下sentence structure,时态,还有一些语句通顺之类的,总之看不顺眼的都请指出!

英语作文 检查很简单的narrative paragraph.求检查一下sentence structure,时态,还有一些语句通顺之类的,总之看不顺眼的都请指出!

reasons 用单数

whole summer time 去掉time

  3. 第三行, but 用but also,前面用逗号

4, 倒数第五航, save 改成safe

5. 最后一段, why 后用陈述句语序.why she was always being strict with me.

6.最后一句  引号里用现在时即可.

the reasons for it is that I had to spend the whole summer in the countryside with unfriendly mosquitoes and cockroaches, as well as I don't like my grandmother.
For instance, If I were eating chi...

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the reasons for it is that I had to spend the whole summer in the countryside with unfriendly mosquitoes and cockroaches, as well as I don't like my grandmother.
For instance, If I were eating chips that bought from the store, she would .....
they way she treated my brother and I was totally difference. perhaps she donot love me at all
As I growing up, I started to ....

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