谁帮我修改一下英语作文(本人初3)Love around usIt's full of love in our life.So we can find it everywhere.For example,we can find love amang the friends and we can also find it in our family.When l'm in trouble,my friends will help me wit

谁帮我修改一下英语作文(本人初3)Love around usIt's full of love in our life.So we can find it everywhere.For example,we can find love amang the friends and we can also find it in our family.When l'm in trouble,my friends will help me wit
谁帮我修改一下英语作文(本人初3)
Love around us
It's full of love in our life.So we can find it everywhere.For example,we can find love amang the friends and we can also find it in our family.When l'm in trouble,my friends will help me with the trouble.When l'm in danger,my parents will protect me,because l'm their only son.So l think not only my friends but also my parents are the important people in my heart.And l believe that love will arrive every corner in the world in the near future.
请问3楼的,我这个在中考可以拿几分?
中考是18分.....大家都给打下分

谁帮我修改一下英语作文(本人初3)Love around usIt's full of love in our life.So we can find it everywhere.For example,we can find love amang the friends and we can also find it in our family.When l'm in trouble,my friends will help me wit
文章写得好,鼓励!
但是有拼写错误：第二排的amang应该是among.
第四排的with the trouble多余了,删掉就可以了.
第五句想表达的意思是：因为我是他们唯一的儿子.Yes?那么翻译错了.应该是：Because I'm
their son the only.
最后的near future想说是：不久的将来.Yes?把near删去,在future 后面加soon就可以了.
保留著作权,至于你说什么我不干涉,只帮你看看有没有错误就行.
（中考作文是15分的,你写这样可以得个12分,如果书写好的话13分的样子吧.但有的老师是不看书写的!所以应该是12分左右）

Love around us
It's full of love in our life.So we can find it easily around us.For example,we can find love amang the friends and it also can be find in our family.When l'm in trouble,my friends ...

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Love around us
It's full of love in our life.So we can find it easily around us.For example,we can find love amang the friends and it also can be find in our family.When l'm in trouble,my friends will help me to solve it.When l'm in danger,my parents will protect me,because l'm they love me so much.Therefore l think not only my friends but also my parents are the most important people in my heart.And l believe that love will arrive every corner in the world in the future.

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Our life is full of love,we can find it everywhere.we can find love among the friends,the families.When I have trouble,my friends will help me get out of the trouble.When l'm in danger,my parents will...

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Our life is full of love,we can find it everywhere.we can find love among the friends,the families.When I have trouble,my friends will help me get out of the trouble.When l'm in danger,my parents will protect me,because they love me.Love is around the whole world,when you drop,it can help u stand up;when u feel sad,it can make u happy.
Love helps a lot of people rebuild there families after 5-11 earthquake,i think its the most important thing in the world.

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写得很不错 你应该将你写的作文要求打上来

除了 拼写错误：第二排的amang应该是among 还有用的 最高级 错了 应该是the most important 但是写的的确不错 很会利用句型 努力哈