帮我翻译和修改错的单词!My HobbiesI used to music helped me relax, When I was tired. It also brought me happiness. New my hobbies are doing sports like pinging basketball . Can make me strange swimming is a good way to keep fit , and It

帮我翻译和修改错的单词!My HobbiesI used to music helped me relax, When I was tired. It also brought me happiness. New my hobbies are doing sports like pinging basketball . Can make me strange swimming is a good way to keep fit , and It
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My Hobbies
I used to music helped me relax, When I was tired. It also brought me happiness. New my hobbies are doing sports like pinging basketball . Can make me strange swimming is a good way to keep fit , and It can help to keep my heart and langs healthy. what hobbies do you have? Can you tell me?

帮我翻译和修改错的单词!My HobbiesI used to music helped me relax, When I was tired. It also brought me happiness. New my hobbies are doing sports like pinging basketball . Can make me strange swimming is a good way to keep fit , and It
我的爱好
我过去用音乐助我放松,当我累了.它也给我带来了快乐.现在我的爱好是做运动像篮球.可以让我强壮的游泳是健身的好方法,它可以帮助保持我的内心和语言肢体健康.你有什么业余爱好?你能告诉我吗?

My Hobbies
I used to listen to music to relax myself when I was tired. It also brought me happiness. Now my hobbies are sports such as pinging, basketball and so on. Swimming is a good way to keep fit , and it can help to keep my heart and langs healthy. What hobbies do you have? Can you tell me?

I use music let me relax when I am tired. It also bring happiness to me.My new hobby is playing basketball . it can make me strong. Swimming is a good way to keep fit , and it can keep my heart an...

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I use music let me relax when I am tired. It also bring happiness to me.My new hobby is playing basketball . it can make me strong. Swimming is a good way to keep fit , and it can keep my heart and lang healthy. what hobbies do you have? Can you tell me?
那个前面不要用过去式，因为是你喜欢的...属于一般时态

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music used tohelp me relax When I was tired. It also brought me happinessNww my hobbies are sports like pingpang and basketball.they can make me stronger. swimming is a good way to keep fit , and It can help keep my constitution healthy. what hobbies do you have? Can you tell me?

When I was tired, I used to listen to music to help me relax. It also brought me happiness. Now my hobbies are doing sports like playing basketball. They can make me stronger.Swimming is also a good way to keep fit , and It can help me to keep my heart healthy. What hobbies do you have? Can you tell me?

I used to music helped me relax, 改成：I like listening to music, which helps me relax. (后半句也可以改成：,and it helps me relax)
When I was tired. It also brought me happiness. 改成： When I am tired, it also ...

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I used to music helped me relax, 改成：I like listening to music, which helps me relax. (后半句也可以改成：,and it helps me relax)
When I was tired. It also brought me happiness. 改成： When I am tired, it also brings me happiness
New my hobbies are doing sports like pinging basketball . 改成：Now my hobby is doing sports like playing basketball.
Can make me strange swimming is a good way to keep fit , and It can help to keep my heart and langs healthy. 改成：It can make me strong. And swimming is also a good way to keep fit, and It can help to keep my heart and lungs healthy.
最后两句神马问题都木有？
what hobbies do you have? Can you tell me?
你的英语让偶们童鞋内牛满面！！！！！！！！

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My Hobbies
I used to listening music to help myself to relax When I felt tired ,and at the same time it also let me feel happiness. Now my hobby is sport exercise like ping-pong and basketball...

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My Hobbies
I used to listening music to help myself to relax When I felt tired ,and at the same time it also let me feel happiness. Now my hobby is sport exercise like ping-pong and basketball ,they give me a strong body. Well, swimming is also a good way to keep fit , and It can keep my heart healthy and make my legs look much better. what hobbies do you have? Can you tell me?
在我感觉累的时候我曾经用听音乐来帮助自己放松，同时它也让我感觉到了幸福。现在我的爱好是运动像乒乓球和篮球运动，它们使我的身体很强壮。嗯，游泳也是一个保持健康的好方法，而且可以让我的心脏健康并使我的腿部看上去更棒了。你有什么爱好？你能告诉我吗？

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When I was tired ,I used to listen to music to help me relax. It brought happiness to me .My new hobbies are doing sports such as palying pingpong and basketball. They can make me strong and swim...

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When I was tired ,I used to listen to music to help me relax. It brought happiness to me .My new hobbies are doing sports such as palying pingpong and basketball. They can make me strong and swimming is a good way to keep fit ,also it can make me health.What kind of hobbies
do you have ? Can you tell me?
每当我累的时候我经常听音乐来放松自己，这让我感高兴。我的新爱好是运动，像打乒乓球和篮球。这使我变得强壮，其实游泳也是一个保持身材的好办法，也使我身体健康。你们有什么爱好？能告诉我吗？

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I used to listen to music because it could help me relax when I was tired. It also brought about happiness to me. But now my hobby is doing sports,like playing basketball and swimming. Swimming is a good way to keep fit and it is helpful for me to keep heart and lung healthy too.
Can you tell what hobby you have?