作业帮懂英语的帮我看看这篇小作文有没有错误,有错误帮忙说下,My dream is to have a quality life.But now I know that I need to do a lot of things .First I want to study hard and get good grades .Then I will go to a good university and
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懂英语的帮我看看这篇小作文有没有错误,有错误帮忙说下,My dream is to have a quality life.But now I know that I need to do a lot of things .First I want to study hard and get good grades .Then I will go to a good university and
懂英语的帮我看看这篇小作文有没有错误,有错误帮忙说下,
My dream is to have a quality life.But now I know that I need to do a lot of things .First I want to study hard and get good grades .Then I will go to a good university and have a good job in the future.Finally I will get much knowledge and money .This is my dream I believe that one day my dream will come true
懂英语的帮我看看这篇小作文有没有错误,有错误帮忙说下,My dream is to have a quality life.But now I know that I need to do a lot of things .First I want to study hard and get good grades .Then I will go to a good university and
如果这是一个小学三年级学生写的,那还不错!在语法上：就只有第一句有点小问题,不能说是a quality life.根据你想表达的意思最好是high quality of life.这篇文章最大的缺点是用的是chinglish,即中国式英语.在考试时很忌讳这种写法,这种作文没什么亮点,淡然无味.容易让别人觉得水平不高!
My dream is to have a quality life 改为 My dream is having a quality life
I believe that one day my dream will come true 改为 I believe that one day my dream will be true
我的梦想是有质量的生活。但现在我知道，我需要做的事情很多，首先，我要努力学习，取得好成绩，然后我会去一个好大学，并在未来有一个良好的工作。最后，我会得到多的知识和金钱。，这是我的梦想，我相信有一天我的梦想就会成真 这是翻译后的，没问题！~...
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我的梦想是有质量的生活。但现在我知道，我需要做的事情很多，首先，我要努力学习，取得好成绩，然后我会去一个好大学，并在未来有一个良好的工作。最后，我会得到多的知识和金钱。，这是我的梦想，我相信有一天我的梦想就会成真 这是翻译后的，没问题！~
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你看第一句改成这样：I have a dream that I would have a quality life in the future 行不行？
后面的Then I go to ……future.改成Then I will get into a good university, and find a good job in the future.
How do I spend my summer vacation Now , all student are on their summer vacation. We are all very happy because we have two months to relax
quality 应该用形容词 其他的没有什么错误吧