Dear English teacher:You were laborious!Here the first wish you happy teachers' day.Thank you for your kindness and patience.You gave us exactly what we need and want.To have you as our teacher is our greatest pleasure!We all love you!Let your work w

Dear English teacher:You were laborious!Here the first wish you happy teachers' day.Thank you for your kindness and patience.You gave us exactly what we need and want.To have you as our teacher is our greatest pleasure!We all love you!Let your work w
Dear English teacher:
You were laborious!Here the first wish you happy teachers' day.Thank you for your kindness and patience.You gave us exactly what we need and want.To have you as our teacher is our greatest pleasure!We all love you!Let your work well,healthy body,all the luck!
WangZiXiao
On September 11,2012

Dear English teacher:You were laborious!Here the first wish you happy teachers' day.Thank you for your kindness and patience.You gave us exactly what we need and want.To have you as our teacher is our greatest pleasure!We all love you!Let your work w
第二句语句不通,第四句动词时态不对（而且need和want是同义反复）,第五句主语问题,第七句用词不当.
突显你的Chinease English,我个人虽然也没完全摆脱这个缺点,但我愿意稍微修改下,跟你分享,姑妄听之.
Dear English Teacher,
You were toilsome!Happy Teachers' Day!Thanks for your kindness and patience.You gave us what we needed.It is our great pleasure to have your as our teacher.We all love you!Wish you enjoy your work and keep healthy.All the luck!