求BEC中级改错题答案~ (有没有人做过这篇啊?)With flatter organizations and self-directedteams becoming common 34 with personal computers and networks making information available to more35 people more quickly, the raw number of manager

求BEC中级改错题答案~ (有没有人做过这篇啊?)With flatter organizations and self-directedteams becoming common 34 with personal computers and networks making information available to more35 people more quickly, the raw number of manager
求BEC中级改错题答案~ (有没有人做过这篇啊?)
With flatter organizations and self-directedteams becoming common
34 with personal computers and networks making information available to more
35 people more quickly, the raw number of managers needed is decreasing down
36 However, the need for

求BEC中级改错题答案~ (有没有人做过这篇啊?)With flatter organizations and self-directedteams becoming common 34 with personal computers and networks making information available to more35 people more quickly, the raw number of manager
34 with 改成 and 这是两个并列句
35 needed 去掉
36 for 改为of