小弟写得不怎么好.Happy Angel Mimi“Ha~ppi~Ha~ppi”,shouted the little girl.Could you imaging a one-year-old girl pronouncing the pleasing and beautiful syllable?But this time,I can tell that this is the great work of my angel sister,Mimi.Th

小弟写得不怎么好.Happy Angel Mimi“Ha~ppi~Ha~ppi”,shouted the little girl.Could you imaging a one-year-old girl pronouncing the pleasing and beautiful syllable?But this time,I can tell that this is the great work of my angel sister,Mimi.Th
小弟写得不怎么好.
Happy Angel Mimi
“Ha~ppi~Ha~ppi”,shouted the little girl.Could you imaging a one-year-old girl pronouncing the pleasing and beautiful syllable?But this time,I can tell that this is the great work of my angel sister,Mimi.The girl is her daughter,and is now learning to speak.It is my sister’s outgoing and good-at-teaching that impress her.
My sister Mimi was a student majored in kindergener when I was 7.Her school was in Jiangmen.Day by day I dreamed about her coming back until an evening,mum told me that she would be back that night on vacation.Surprisedly,I pulled my mum out to the bus stop waiting for my sister’s shinning appearance.She was lovely and affable.Then the following winter,she celebrated Christmas with us.Due to her exposed to the outside world and spending time with so many 16-somethings,she is always full of funny ideas.Those days I would sleep with her,sharing our individual stories till midnight.Time flies,and she was like a blooming flower ready to find a boyfriend.As her nearest friend,I would always act as the bodyguard for her when she had date with others.Memories poured in,and they were honey shaped.She was always smiling.
Last year,Mimi had her own baby.She named her “妍”,which means to be a happy girl.She’s an angel of he daughter,an angel of all her kids,and a happy angel of me!

小弟写得不怎么好.Happy Angel Mimi“Ha~ppi~Ha~ppi”,shouted the little girl.Could you imaging a one-year-old girl pronouncing the pleasing and beautiful syllable?But this time,I can tell that this is the great work of my angel sister,Mimi.Th
第一行 shouted 应该是伴随状语吧 改为shouting
第一行 could是情态动词 后面跟原型 imagining 改成imagine
is the great work 为什么加the?最高级么?
后面怎么看不懂了呢?
你到底是要表达什么呢?